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Title: Who Gets the Girl? [Chapter 22]

Players: Tiffany, Taeyeon, Jessica, Yoona, Mention of Sunny, Seohyun, BoA

Pairing(s): Taeny, Past!Taengsic, Yoonsic

Rating: R, for language

Genre: AU, Rom-Com Drama-Llama.

Warning(s): I pulverize ships, apparently.

Disclaimer: I don't own Soshi. I don't own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.

Chap. Summary: On the other side of town, the rest of the gay ladies have their fair share of problems.

Author's Notes: Ugh. Re-reading and editing this one was painful. Hope it’s okay. I’m currently writing this from my secret bunker just in case. (I’mafraidofshipperslol)


22- Tiffany

“Damnit, I’m so hungry.” Taeyeon unlocked the front door to room 5L. “ We should have stayed at Sunny’s. There’s food there.”

“But my clothes are heeeere,” Tiffany whined, following her girlfriend into the apartment.

“How about we transfer all our stuff to Sunny’s place? She wouldn’t care.”

“That feels so...intrusive. She has her own life, too.”

“Yeah, yeah. The best option would be...you know...” Taeyeon trailed off, idly opening a cabinet.

Living together. This isn’t the first time she’s alluded to it. As commitment-phobic Taeyeon’s been in the past, she’s managed to live with some of her past girlfriends. Is this common in Korea? Or common among lesbians?

“And how would you pay for a new place?”

“I don’t know. I’d find a way.”

"If you say so, babe." Tiffany unconsciously squeezed at her cell phone. Never thought that I’d be awaiting a call from one of Taeyeon’s many exes.

Upon learning her name, Tiffany went on a Google-spree researching the woman. To her disappointment, she was just as gorgeous as she feared. And successful. She began to wonder if working under such a person would be a good idea. Wouldn't want the green-eyed monster inside to rear its ugly head.

But that morning, she received a lengthy, meandering email detailing the importance of “balanced energy and camaraderie” from a Kwon Boa. After a long read accompanied by constant eye rolls, Tiffany got the gist of the email: She’d be needed soon--prior to the night shift. At what time? No clue. Apparently, Boa will contact me when she “feels right” about it. How frustrating.

I’m on standby for my first job.

Taeyeon yanked at the refrigerator door and loudly groaned. “Nothin'. Just wine and water. Should we be concerned about Jessica’s eating habits?”

“What’s in that bag?”

Taeyeon spun around to view a brown paper bag adorned with ornate French lettering abandoned on a stool.

“Sweet, croissants!” she cheered, peeping inside.

“Are those for us?”

The shorter girl already stuffed half a crescent into her mouth. She ripped off the other half and held it to Tiffany’s lips. “Who else could they be for?”

She grasped it in her teeth and marveled at the buttery flavor. “Mmmm. She’d never buy a whole bag for herself. Unless...”

"Hm?"

Tiffany bolted across the room to hold her ear at the door. “Jessiii? Are you in there!?”

She heard movement preceding a very cold “Yes.”

I knew it. A wink summoned Taeyeon to join in on the fun.

“She’s with Sunny?” Taeyeon mouthed.

Tiffany shrugged, holding back a giggle. Who else could it be? Sunny hadn’t come home last night. What a success! Still, I would have appreciated a quick victory text.Jessiiii--Are you entertaining company?”

“Go away.”

“Oh, are we interrupting?”

“I hate you. Leave.”

“I will once I get my stuff from your room. I want to change.”

The annoyed voice switched to English. “Go buy a new outfit, rich bitch.”

Tiffany gasped. “How rude!”

“The croissants are great!” Taeyeon hummed cheerily, stuffing another into her face.

“Fuck you! Those are ours--mine.”

“Come out with Tiffany’s bag and I won’t finish them.”

Tiffany leaned over to peck her lady’s full, puffy cheek with gratitude. She’s the cutest little chipmunk. My chipmunk.

The couple recoiled when the door swished open just wide enough for Jessica to weasel out with a pink duffle. At first glance, she’d come off as someone chillin’ in their sweats and t-shirt. However, her face revealed all. The glassy eyes. Red, swollen lips. She’s totally been gettin’ busy.

Taeyeon laughed, offering the paper bag. “Dude, where’s your makeup? You look like a ghost.”

Jessica motioned for them to follow her to the kitchen.

“Soooo, you and Sunny had a great date!” Tiffany squealed, hopping up and down in place.

“Shut up. I hate both of you right now.”

Her face fell. “We were excited.”

“No. Just...no.” She lowered her voice and held her hands out for the duo to do the same. “Sunny isn’t in there, okay?”

“But...” Taeyeon shook her head in disbelief. “Who is it?”

Jessica crossed her arms. “None of your business.”

“What happened to Sunny?” Tiffany’s heart hurt remembering all the hopeful words they exchanged. How she dismissed Sunny’s doubts.

A shrug. “I don’t know. I just came out here to ask you not ruin my chances.”

“Can you let up on the secrecy for a second? We’re concerned about her.”

“Like I said--I don’t know.”

Taeyeon pulled out her phone to, presumably, message her friend. Jessica didn’t wait for her to finish. She snatched the croissant bag, padded back to her bedroom, and shut the door with a loud snap.

“Where could she be?” Tiffany pictured Sunny at a bar in some remote location, drowning her sorrows. She needs a friend right now. Jessica is impossible sometimes. How could she have a date with Sunny last night, but by morning bed someone else? The timing’s way off.

“I’m waiting for her reply.”

The mood in the room would have remained tense if Taeyeon hadn't gazed up at Tiffany with a forlorn face covered in bread flakes. Her abrupt laughter had her girlfriend frowning until she pulled her by the chin to wipe the crumbs away.

It’s crazy. All these years, I’ve been swooning over the image of a rugged man taking charge and holding me close like in the movies. Now, look at me. I have a pouty, baby-faced woman by my side and I’m completely smitten.

When Taeyeon’s lips parted in one of her signature smirks, Tiffany’s felt an acute clench at her heart. She quickly backed away and headed to the bathroom.

“I gotta...I should grab my things. Can’t live another day without my flat iron.”

“Sounds like a first-world problem.”

She forced out a laugh and collected her belongings from the white cabinets jutting from the wall. Tiffany didn’t give herself a chance to process Taeyeon watching. No doubt her girlfriend picked up on the change of tone.

Everything’s working out so well.

Noticing Taeyeon moving to check on her pet, she retrieved the phone from her pocket. Her thumb swiped across the lock screen, revealing its newest background. A close-up shot of the slightly creepy, hyper realistic sketch of a mastodon. Since showing her “interest” in the t-rex on her shirt Thursday night, Taeyeon began drawing random dinosaur pictures for her. On Post-it notes. Corners of notebook paper. Napkins. Tiffany found the latest masterpiece stuck to her favorite sunglasses. These always bring me back to the first time we made love. The smallest gestures make me feel so special.

Tiffany never considered herself a pessimist, yet their bubble of perfection had to pop eventually. I’m not ready for it.

She nabbed a hairspray bottle from the squadron of hair products and blindly slid it onto the sink counter. The sound of something hard scattering to the floor caught her attention.

Oh my god...

Out the bathroom she flew, startling Taeyeon bent over baby-talking the snake.

“Taeyeon, look!” Tiffany breathed, an evil grin forming.

“What’s up?”

The dark-haired girl led her to their couch, struggling to contain her excitement.

Ooooh. Are you feeling frisky?” Taeyeon purred, landing onto her lap.

“Are you?” Tiffany snickered, placing an open-mouthed kiss against her jaw.

“I’m always game for sex, baby.”

“Good, because that’s not why I called you over.” She ignored Taeyeon’s whine as she held up her phone with her right hand. Taeyeon eyed her curiously until, with a flick of a thumb, she shifted it over to reveal another iPhone. The shocked reaction had Tiffany stifling her own laugh with a palm.

“I know her passcode. Do you wanna snoop through her stuff?”

“Um, YES.

They cackled like devious teenagers while she tapped in the numbers. “Look at that. Two new texts.”

“Open it! Who’re they from?” Taeyeon impatiently grasped for the phone. Tiffany held it from her reach, shielding the screen with her hand. They play-fought for a few more minutes, cheeks pink from giggles until they actually took the time to read the texts.

Giggling.

Down to smiling.

Straight faces.

Then...

“The FUCK?!

Tiffany’s eyes stretched. Uh oh. These were not the texts for Taey to see. “S-Seohyun? I didn’t know they talked.”

“She misses her? The fuck, man!?”

“And a winky face...you don’t think...”

“Hell yeah, I think so! Why else would her clip be here?”

Tiffany turned, facing the door. “Do you think she came to pick it up today?”

Out of a bout of skill or plain intuition, Tiffany had the mind to wrap her arms around Taeyeon’s waist before the girl hopped up to confront them.

“Let go of me, woman.”

“I don’t want you to say something you’ll regret,” Tiffany hissed, wincing at the other girl’s squirming.

“I have every right to tell them to go fuck themselves rather than each other.”

“Why do you care?”

“Because it’s messed up.”

“How is it messed up that she slept with Jessica while you were okay with Sunny doing it?”

The struggle slowed down. “Sunny’s...liked her longer. So, Seohyun should respect that.”

“Then, let’s find Sunny and she can deal with it.”

Taeyeon threw her hands up, agitated. “It’s weird. First, Seohyun bangs my ex and now she’s with my--”

A pause.

Tiffany’s eyes narrowed. The grip tightened. “She’s with your...what?

The brown-haired girl throatily sighed, dropping her hands to her lap. “It’s not like that.

“What is it like, Taey?”

She watched her girlfriend’s mouth gape open a few times, attempting to explain. Whatever it is, I feel like it’s going to really piss me off.

As the seconds passed, Taeyeon’s quest for the correct words seemed more and more unfruitful. Eventually, her gaze settled on her phone. “Sunny replied. Said she’s out.”

Tiffany didn’t answer. Eyes still glued onto Taeyeon’s quivering lip.

“It’s really dumb, Tiffany. Not a big deal.”

“So, tell me what it is.”

“You’ll get mad. Why risk making you mad?”

“I think I’m pretty damn capable of deciding for myself, Taeyeon.”

“It’s just a dumb pact.”

“A pact?”

“S-something I came up with back when she was living at my old place.”

“Go on.”

A long sigh. “Okay, so...Jessica had just broken up with some doctor chick. And my relationships were inconsistent. We got really close over the span of her stay.”

“Sexually?”

No. Not sexually. She became more than a friend, but less of a lover, I suppose. We promised that if we’re both single by the time we’re thirty, then we’d get together. She’d focus on her career and I’d do whatever. Not a big deal.”

Tiffany sunk into the couch as she thought about the situation. Should I be mad? I mean, it seems like something close friends would do. Granted, I’ve never had a backup husband or wife.

Is this why Jessica’s so protective of her? So she wouldn’t be the lone single person in case Taeyeon found her match? Or, am I being unreasonable? This just seems so...intimate. “Do you have feelings for her?”

“What? Hell no.”

“Be honest with me, Taey. You can’t just turn attraction on and off. You have to feel something towards Jessica for this to occur.”

Taeyeon rolled her eyes and shrugged. “We see each other like a security blanket. If we’re both lonely...why not? It means so much to her.”

“And you?”

“If it means so much to her, it means a lot to me.”

Tiffany swallowed the jealousy-shaped lump in her throat. Should I ask? I’ll probably hate the answer to this, too. “And Sunny? If I hadn’t interfered--did you believe that she had a chance?”

The shorter girl’s mouth opened, but only a shortened, indecipherable syllable came out. Instead, she shook her head, averting her line of sight. Tiffany stared, blinking tears from the corners of her eyes. She hadn’t blinked since the feelings question.

How come she needs Jessica for security? Do I have to accept that she’ll always be a backup? MY backup? She pushed Taeyeon off her lap, getting to her feet to pace.

“Tiffany--babe. You're my number one. This didn’t come up in conversation ‘cause it wasn’t important. You’re important.”

“Does she love you?” Tiffany stopped mid-stride to look down at Taeyeon, waiting for an answer.

Jessica?! Oh god, no. Look around us. I’m with you. And she’s with...” Taeyeon stood up to make an advance to the bedroom door.

Two harsh bangs to the painted woodgrain. “Come out! I need to talk to you.”

“Damnit, Taeyeon. Can't you two go argue somewhere else?” Tiffany pictured the blonde thoroughly rolling her eyes on the other side.

Seohyun. Hon, I’m not mad at you anymore. Let’s make things right.”

Three approaching stomps and Jessica swung the door open. Her eyes were fashioned into pinched slits, face already red with anger. “Taeyeon. I’m warning you. Shut. Up.”

“I’m not mad anymore. I won’t bring up Yuri ever again. She can have her! Or you. I-I just want to talk to her.”

Tiffany’s heart sank at how soft Taeyeon’s words came out. Maybe she does want to fix this. Jessica should listen. “We know Seohyun’s in there, Jess. Let’s talk.”

“I think you should talk.”

All heads turned to the tall, pretty woman who materialized behind Jessica. And that tall, pretty woman is NOT Seohyun.

Oops.

“Jessica. I should go. Please don’t follow me.”

The blonde’s scowl melted into a panicked expression. Desperate, even. “Please. Yoona, no. They’re stupid. They don’t know what they’re talking about. I really want--”

“I texted Sooyoung. She’s swinging by to pick me up in a few. Excuse me.” Yoona pivoted past the shorter women, heading for the exit.

Jessica hurried after her, frantically reaching to catch her hand. “Yoongie. Don’t go. I’ll kick them out so we can discuss this.”

“Please, don’t touch me.” Yoona snatched her hand away.

Jessica body crumbled. She held onto the counter to stay afloat.

“See you at work, Jessica.”

And then she was gone.

Tiffany and Taeyeon were frozen, witnessing their usually well-put together friend break apart before their eyes. She scratched restless fingers over the marble finish as she noisily coughed out a sob.

After what felt like an eternity, Taeyeon took the risk to speak.

“Oh, damn. Did I make things worse?”

In a blur, Jessica managed to spin around and lunge herself at Taeyeon head-first. The left-field action had Tiffany gasping rather than disengaging the grapple. Jessica’s fists held onto two large handfuls of Taeyeon’s light brown hair and literally threw her to the floor. The smaller girl yelped in pain, but evaded the next attack by pushing her to the couch. Jessica held onto a hefty portion the hair to take her down, too. Taeyeon landed on top and, to Tiffany’s fright, clawed at the fabric on her shoulders to slam her repeatedly against the cushion.

"Are-" Slam. "you-" Slam. "outta your mind!?" Slam.

Maybe I should...

Don’t get into this!” Taeyeon spat to Tiffany before she made a move to help.

Jessica’s face turned beet red with her nose wrinkled in rage. She kicked her legs furiously beneath Taeyeon’s weight. Then, the crisp clack of the blonde’s half-balled fist connecting to Taeyeon’s cheek sent her doubling over to the floor, clutching her face.

“S-stop!” Tiffany screamed in English, momentarily forgetting all Korean.

Jessica roughly jerked at Taeyeon' leg, dragging her across the flooring. “GET THE HELL OUT MY APARTMENT, YOU NO-GOOD BITCH!!!”

NO.” She took hold of the couch’s underside and clumsily lurched herself forward. Jessica went stumbling after her. As she regained her legging, Taeyeon shot up to her feet, adjusting the waistline of her pants. Jessica snatched her phone from the couch and sent it flying at her head. Taeyeon slapped it out the way--mistakenly into Tiffany’s direction--where she toppled backwards, bumping into Jessica.

The other Jessica.

The tank fell onto its side and the freaked reptile slithered free. Jessica and Tiffany filled the apartment with high-pitched screams and jumped onto the couch for refuge while Taeyeon chased her scaly friend--the injured eye squeezed shut. She cooed words of comfort to re-captured Jessica as she tangled around her arm. She used her other hand to reorder its living quarters.

Without another word, Jessica went straight to her room and slammed the door.

Babyyyy,” Tiffany wailed, bringing Taeyeon into a hug.

“I’m all right, babe.”

“Let’s go wash your face.”

...

“Sorry you had to see that,” Taeyeon murmured as Tiffany dabbed her face with a dry towel.

The slap sounded about the same as its damage. Half her girlfriend’s face was pink, an eye partially swollen, and the corner of her bottom lip seeped a dot of blood. Tiffany glided her fingers along the smooth skin of her cheek. The shorter girl’s gaze stayed locked to the floor.

“Do you forgive me?” she asked in her softest voice.

Tiffany waited until Taeyeon finally looked up to speak. “For which thing?”

Taeyeon pouted. “Everything.”

She folded the towel and neatly draped it onto a grab bar. Too many things happened in a flash. First I’m happy with Taeyeon, then angry, then sympathetic, scared, and now...I’m angry again. Angry at what? I’m not sure. I need to collect my thoughts.

“Babe? Do you forgive me?”

“No.”

She gave one final glance at Taeyeon’s stunned face before closing the bathroom door behind her.

Jessica stood there waiting. Makeup. Dark sunglasses. A lacy top and jeans. Purse on her shoulder. “You’re coming with me. It's time to explain last night,” she stated, walking to the front door. “Grab an umbrella; it’s starting to rain.”

Wordlessly, Tiffany complied. She gathered her items and left.

Next Chapter: Hyoyeon!

Date: 2013-08-09 07:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karou95.livejournal.com
Violent Sica was totally unanticipated but so believable and what's gonna happen to Taeny (spark of hope in my jeti heart) and WHY IS HYOYEON NEXT NO NO (nothing against hyo bb) but I NEED TO KNOW WHAT JESSI IS GONNA DOOOO

YOU are too good at this. i can't concentrate on studying anymore. too many feels. sorry for the incoherence, please stop all the feels no who am i kidding never stop and please update sooon!

Date: 2013-08-10 01:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
Karou!!! *hugs*

Did Violent!Sica surprise you? GOOD. She surprised Taeyeon's face, too. Hahaha why am I not shocked that your heart is Jeti-shaped? ;D

HYO IS INTEGRAL TO THE STORY. hahaha yes yessss, we all want to know Jessi's next move.

:0000 THANK YOU. I strive to ruin the concentration of school-ish folk all over the globe. You're welcome. You were very coherent. ^^

Update yo fic, gorl.

Date: 2013-08-09 08:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anhthud2.livejournal.com
i'm so sorry i didn't comment on the seohyun chapter! life kinda got in the way. anyway, seori is cute but yuri seems like she's definitely on the rebound. how do you get over such a committed relationship so easily :( and ever since her night with jessica, i think the seed has been planted into seohyun's head that she doesn't have to be a one gal only kinda girl. yuri is hot as hell, but there are plenty of hot fish in the sea, seohyun! but damn, yuri is such a charmer!!! i'd fall for her too. fave line of the chapter: "Bitch, you need to make yourself scarce.” hyoyeon is comic gold.

OMG YOU ARE SUCH A SHIP WRECKER!!!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!! yoonsic didn't even get to be happy for an entire day! they didn't even get to eat their croissants. jessica put on goddamn sneakers to buy those croissants!!!!!!! jessica doesn't just break down and sob over any girl. she just doesn't slap the shit out of her best friend for any girl. only yoona can break her out of her icy shell!!! oh man, look at what you did. somewhere along the course of this story, you got me shipping yoonsic HARD lol. yoonsic 4 lyfe. come backkkk, yoona!

i was so not ready for such intense dramz. a girl fight??? YES YES YES. you keep revealing so many fun twists. love it. so what if taengsic were each other's back-up plans? i can't see them being anything but bros. i hope tiffany will feel more secure as we go. i mean, jessica almost wanted to end taeyeon. i'm not sure she should worry about any hidden attraction at the moment lol (but seriously big mouth taeyeon, way to fuck shit up ugh). i knew their happy bubble was gonna pop sooner or later, but my taeny heart has faith!!! (faith is a scary thing while reading this, since you tend to pulverize ships and drown me in feels all the time. you sly devil, you)

thank you for spending so much time creating the great storylines. i know it's far from easy keeping track of everything and editing must be such a pain. i really respect everything you do. and all your work doesn't go to waste, trust me. it's always an absolute joy to read your updates.

Date: 2013-08-10 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
My fave little R2D2!! :3

YOU SHOULD BE SAWRY. THAT'S WHY I RUINED YOONSIC. hahaha I'm just kidding, bb. Your comments are always a magical read. Missed you.

Sooo Seori. Lol. Yuri sure did bounce back easily, huh? Hmmm. >_> Doesn't look like traditional monogamy is a thing that interests Seohyun. She's a ~free spirit~. haha Awwwwww would that rose-and-on-her-knee thing work on you? WOULD YOU TAKE COUPLE PICS WITH KWON YURI?

For the next few chapters, Hyo quotes are some of my favorites. XD

Hahaha but really. The ship did hit something. And that something was Taeyeon. And then Jessica hit Taeyeon. D: NOT EVEN A WHOLE DAY.

AHHHHHAHAHHA DEAD. You brought up the sneakers! Omg she put on sneakers to get the croissants!! XD Jessica does seem to show some more melty personality traits in this one. Is our deer Yoona (hehe see what i did there) gone forever?

YES, girl fight! Taengsic. Lovers or Lesbros? Tiffany definitely has a jellz streak, soooo..

Thanks for spending the time to write such a awesome comment. I'm smiling. :)

Date: 2013-08-10 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anhthud2.livejournal.com
Who wouldn't wanna take couple pics with yuri??? I'd drop my panties in a sec if that cheesy, cheating, sexy beezy showed up at my front door too lol. taengsic is so freakin complicated. Me and Tiffany both wanna learn about them, stat. So I single handedly destroyed yoonsic?? haha you seo fany
Edited Date: 2013-08-10 06:07 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-08-10 06:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
....yeah you're right. Kwon Yuri at your the, begging for forgiveness with a rose. My pants would melt off, no doubt. XD

LOL. Maybe you and Tiffany should put your heads together and discuss this. XD

I'm Seo Fany that it makes me Soo Sic.

Date: 2013-08-10 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anhthud2.livejournal.com
the amount of joy i receive from snsd puns is a little embarassing

Date: 2013-08-11 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
It's all good. I love 'em too. If you come up with more, I'm all ears. XD

Date: 2013-08-12 11:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anhthud2.livejournal.com
http://soshi-lolz.tumblr.com/post/57786766851

i really should be sleeping right now lol

Date: 2013-08-14 05:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
HOW'D I MISS THIS!?!?

AHHAHAHHAHA THANKS!

Date: 2013-08-09 09:01 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
ohmigoodness wait wait wut??? so much confusion AND drama D:

but first of all....

"Since showing her “interest” in the t-rex on her shirt Thursday night, Taeyeon began drawing random dinosaur pictures for her. On Post-it notes. Corners of notebook paper. Napkins. Tiffany found the latest masterpiece stuck to her favorite sunglasses"

why thank you ;) *well assuming you're referencing this yours truly and not some other dinos you had in mind :dramaqueen:*

so, question question question....*hope i didnt miss anything from your previous updates otherwise i'd sound completely dumb for asking these haha*

here it goes....did tiff just freak out and doubting herself outta nowhere when she mentally said "im not ready for this?" cus one minute she was all happy and giddy then BOOM le wild self doubt appeared

Number two, why on earth Seo pimp's hair clip is still there?? thought Sunny has confiscated that number one evidence, no?? yes?? O_o

and man should Taey knew any better than mentioning her pact to Tiff?? feel like knocking that dense head of hers with my pre-historic claws *i always had this bimbo-ish,valley accented,whiny image of Tiff saying "Taeeeey" all the time btw XD*

lastly, well f*ck *cussing's necessary btw* this just keeps getting better and better, you really know how to write a story bb ;). I literally shouted sh*t 3x while pulling my hair when Taey banged on the door and brought up Seobb, and mostly when Yoona appeared *are you a big fan of soapies, or perhaps novelas by any chance?? drama level is really up to par* XDDDD

I have no words nor expectations for the next update, since you always surpassed them every single time! So just keep doing ya thang bb :)

XOXO

Date: 2013-08-10 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
Look who it is!! And two lengthy replies.

*cracks fingers* I'z ready.

Hahaha Taeyeon's been drawing pics of you everywhere, obvs. What other dinos are as important? ♥

Ooh question time! Love questions.

1. Well, as evidenced in chapter 13, Tiffany's a jelly-type person. She showed it by getting all side-eyeish at Yuri. But, was she ready to get jealous of on of her best friends? That's a lot to thing about. And I mean, she just heard a 8302328 different things. Her gf just got beat up and Jess may be her backup. Don't you ever worry when things go TOO well? finally got a job. She's in another country and fell for someone. It's a lot of pressure anticipating long-term when she has to return the states.

2. It's not. Sunny did take it. But, Seohyun didn't know that. So, in Chapter 21, Seohyun texted Jessica, saying that she left it there (to give her a reason to show back up and squeeze some lovin' in). Taeny didn't see the clip, they just assumed based on the two texts.

"i always had this bimbo-ish,valley accented,whiny image of Tiff saying "Taeeeey"" HAHAHA SO DO I. So, you're right!!

Hahahaaha were you cursing up a storm at Taeyeon? Ugh, such a hot mess.

Nope. I don't watch soaps or novelas haha. I just have a lot of drama floating in my head. My life is actually pretty in-control hahaha

Thankssssss, bb. :3 ♥

Date: 2013-08-09 09:20 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
oh man another one, so many points i'd like to comment from this update but ended up forgetting lolololol *hey im pre-historic okrr*

“Oh, damn. Did I make things worse?”

How effin blind and tactless can she be?? Taey needed to be chased by a t-rex for sure for making this comment. >:(

oh man, violent sica is hot but saddening at the same time, i really know how powerful impulsive expression of anger is :(

and Yoona actually mentioned Soo, did Jess actually catch that?? mmmmmm....

lol'd at "the other jessica" line tho XD

hope this will be logged directly under my first comment, otherwise it'd funny if the two are separated haha

XOXO :*

Date: 2013-08-10 01:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
Another? You're spoiling me. ♥

Hahahaha Taeyeon really ditzed out there. Now we all know why Jess refers to them as "the idiots."

GO CHASE HER, BB. >:(

Awwww. Is my dino impulsive when angry? D: *huggies* I guess we all are, at a point. Hmmm. Not sure if Jessica caught that. She was preoccupied with freaking out. haha

OTHER JESSICA TO THE RESCUE.

xoxoxoxoxoxox,

LA

Date: 2013-08-09 09:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] regreted.livejournal.com
I told you it was obviously kim taeyeon in your poll i told you! Imma edit this later at work so...

HAHA yes! back.

First I thought that you were fucking insane, then fucking brilliant and i'm sticking with that one, you are a brilliant evil genius.

OBVS yoong just got the out i mentioned before, she just got slammed with the thought that she's just gotten seohyun's sloppy seconds, and she really doesn't know that jessica is in fucking love with her.

but since you've made it quite clear that seohyun and yoona are almost the same, i'm pretty sure yoong might might be willing to take back yuri, if that slow idiot doesn't have anymore sex with seohyun, and judging by what was about to go down at the seo household she hasn't... yet.

taeny are destined to break up, that is life. tiffany, in all her raging stupidity should realize that half of this is her fault and that jessica and her friends are way way too messed up. (i will literally cry if they end up together)

i want to delve more into taengsic but my break is up... gotta fly for now!!!!!













okay back again
did you ever see yoong's 1st drama? 9 n 2outs? it's one of my favorites, that's why i always root for those backup pacts, because it's undeniably heart warming to think that all their life or at least for a long time they actually knew who their "one" was and even though it wasn't romantic and physical it they knew in some unacknowledged place that the other was for them, or you know in the totally unrealistic way they just were gonna settle for their friend so they didnt die alone.

but i am not a cynic.

so it was clear to me that jessi and taengoo had some special kind of bond the kind that leads two people to make that sort of pact, that kind of promise that they like each other enough to be together. and that's why that part of this chapter was wholly unsurprising to me.

however my division of your work is kinked by taeyeon's utter carelessness which i had underestimated... she fucked up big time, she really ruined things for jessica in an almost unforgivable way. honestly i just wished she'd have fucked fany right then and there on that tainted couch with croissant crumbs, as inconsiderate as that would have been it would have been better than this.

i don 't know, i guess it's because i'm so hardcore on team jessi for this fic, but i just wanted her to have her happy moment with yoong last at least until idk... dinner time???

in a way you know girls fighting, scratching, and wrestling is like a totally awesome thing, and it was taengsic.... so you know.... gosh just imagine it... lets just say that sparked a lot of spin off ideas in my brain this morning.

OH and stupidest soshi in WGTG has gotten another leading contender because while tiffany and yuri are just plain stupid, taeyeon managed to take stupid to a whole other level, first fucking up yoonsic, and also THAT huge error of revealing to the girl she's crazy for atm, that if shit hit the fan with her she still had sica, forever, my gosh, how dumb do you get? well she's honest at least.


its interesting that i think jessica doesn't blame fany AT ALL for what's happening, it might be because she actually thinks she's dumb (but this i doubt) i think its because she believes taeyeon has some special seduction skills. idk why,

uhg your babies make me have feelings, and also i think i cussed too much in this.

QUESTioNS: one text was from seohyun and the other from soonkyu? the i miss you and then something about the clip?


k bye!!!!! hearts forever!
Edited Date: 2013-08-10 01:34 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-08-10 01:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
I'm so touched. You returned a few times and left an epic comment. I literally stretched in preparation. Let's go:

YOU DON'T TELL ME WHAT, MISSY. I will re-write this whole this if need be--LOL JAYKAY I'd never do something so dumb. Let's see how right you were. :3

A brilliant evil genius. Excellent. *strokes equally evil kitty on lap*

"she's just gotten seohyun's sloppy seconds, and she really doesn't know that jessica is in fucking love with her." Good lawd. You're so good at making me sad about my own story. This broke my heart. I bet you excel at hardcore angst fic. XD

I'd argue that Seohyun and Yoona are quite similar, yes. Not exactly alike, but the similarities can give clues. Or totally throw you off because I'm like that.

HOLD ON. My tiffbb doesn't suffer from ~raging stupidity~. She's just...you know. Different. She's cute dumb. Omg Sica's circle is a hot mess.

Nahhh never saw that drama. Maybe I'll get on that--but I don't watch dramas normally. :0 But, I did see the backup thing fail to work on How I Met Your Mother. hahaha That sounds so sweet tho. And a little sad.

YOU? Not cynical? Hmmmm. ;)

You already caught the underlying Taengsic-ness. You're a sharp gal, tho. So I'm no surprised hehe. I'm not sure if it was you or someone else who mentioned a big difference between Sunny and Taeyeon. Sunny has better control of her feelings and words (even though she's putty around Jess). Taeyeon flakes out and her words obviously got them in trouble.

"i just wished she'd have fucked fany right then and there on that tainted couch with croissant crumbs, as inconsiderate as that would have been it would have been better than this."--This was so win. #truth. Poor Jessica.

Oh, that fight COULD HAVE gotten sexual. But that'd derail so much that I'd have to throw my computer in the trash.

I'm curious about how you'd rank my WGTG babies by --ahem--lack of common sense. LOL So, Yuri messed by big time by lying and Taeyeon messed up big time with the truth. WHY IS LIFE SO DIFFICULT?

It's definitely interesting about their ways of not blaming certain people. Maybe Jess really needed someone with her as she went...wherever at the end of the chapter.

You didn't cuss too much bb--no prob haha. I mean, have you READ my story? XD I appreciate all the feels. I certainly have tons of feels after this comment. (good job, btw. loved it all)

Question time! In Chapter 21, Seohyun sent two texts:
+Hey Jessica~ Would you be up for coffee this week? I miss you.
and
+Btw I think I left my clip there. Maybe I can pick it up one of these days? ;)

I must say this: Your love for WGTG Jessica is so commendable. ^^

HEARTS GALOREEEE ♥ haha Thankssss~~

Date: 2013-08-11 01:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] regreted.livejournal.com
A moment of silence for the almost could have been utterly hot and smex anger/jealousy fueled taenysic threesome that did not happen on account of snakesica and you!





Welp now that the mourning is through... i have to say that lack of common sense award would go to jessica. Because blah blah blah a hot girl on whom you have a crush goes on a 15 hr flight to see you... you fucking do not just hope your pervy player-like bestfriend and suddenly real life bestie (whos head over heels for the latter) do not hook up just cos you say so.

No you fucking DO something about it, i mean in her shoes id have bedded fany like 2 seconds after she passed the threshold, even if tae and her jessica were sitting there on the couch.

Or even just stopped brooding over it and do something... but she's jessica and shes scared of her feelings and shes terrified of rejection or anything just getting close to her squishy insides and so we over look that she is the one that made this bed shes in.

She let taeny get together, she slept with seobb, and then she made love to her dream girl, and she got outted.

Yuri is such a close second that we should probably saw the award in two. But boil it down its just her not being able to make up her mind, she over thinks everything, but she feels too much and i think she was so afraid of making the wrong choice, marry yoona or not, listen to hyo or not, fall in love with seo or not, and then she tried everything and she couldnt let go, not until someone else did. And when she was caught she did something so stupid... i desire marriage... and you know someone who thinks as much as her cant hide something for long.

Then there's tiff, still a bit hard to decipher. But shes running away from her problems, she ran away to her online friend's place, as a surprise...now that defies a lot of peoples idea of common sense...
But she couldnt have known what would have happened once she got there, even iif she wasnt dumb.

Soon to tha Q, she's letting her self be used and strung along, but its not really because shes stupid, and i really think she's not shes just blind because shes looking at jessica and the bitch shines so much you cant blame sunny for the stars in her eyes.

Seohyun is acutely aware of every last thing she does but she fails to account for the unexpected, any thing outside of her control, like Getting picked up by sica or yul confessing her love after she sings the sexica song. Fearless, meticulous and careless.

Hyoyeon... and yoona (is yoona the girl in the title, at first i thought it was tiff, then i knew it wasnt and i thought it was jess, but now i think yoona) well they don't even really fall into this class they dealing with things that happen


Soo young gets the honorable mention though, cos when sica kisses you, you better kiss back. Even if youve got a boyfriend, you pull a fucking katy perry.

And lastly there's taebaby. Tiffany said something like that she was carefree, but that should be corrected to careless. Like for some reason and its probably a big one, shes given up. I dont know where she'd go here. I just think im missing something, why is she so honest, why does she not want responsibilities, why is she so about the moment?




Edited Date: 2013-08-11 01:47 am (UTC)

Date: 2013-08-11 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
I read this last night and had to break to take it all in. Wow, your character breakdowns are so interesting. :0 Like, I know your perspective is your own, but it gives me so much insight on how others may view my characters.

So, the Lack of Common Sense Awards go to:

Tie for 1st: Jessica and Yuri
Tiffany
Sunny
Seolady
Hyoyeon, Yoona
and Sooyoung as an honorable mention.
Taeyeon:TBD

WOW. I really appreciate this list. I'm serious. It helps me see some of them in a different way (all good of course) AND it gave me some direction for the final chapters. Thanks a gazillion manillion!!!!!

Golly, I may need to ask you for a list more often!! XD

Thanks, bb. You're awesome. :3

Date: 2013-08-11 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] regreted.livejournal.com
i got a little carried away, and i'm not always so clear. but yep. that's what my brain spat out.

cheers sweetie.

Date: 2013-08-09 11:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sle3pie.livejournal.com
Wow.. that's a lot to digest, but I loved every word of it.. non-stop, action packed drama.Though I still think taengsic is highly unlikely, love for you to prove me wrong. My recap would be taeny on the rocks, discovery of taengsic's pack, but currently they are confused and fighting. Yoona is upset with Jessica, and Jessica is heart broken, and will reveal some things to tiffany.. maybe in a few chapters, since next should be focusing on and hyosunseori, and their drama. I'm sure there's more, but like I said, there's a lot to digest. Thank you for the update, you continue to throw such awesome drama filled curve balls.

Date: 2013-08-10 01:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
HAI BB. Yeah, this was a very condensed chapter. Many things established. It's the best thing to do or else this story would be 50+ chapters and ugh, that's too much for me. haha

Yeah, Taeny bbs are confused and fighting. :( Yoona's mad. Jessica's mad. Everyone in that room was upset. What a wreck.

Yep. All HyoSunSeoRi next chapter. Maybe their outcome will have less anger? haha

THANKSSSSS. I'm so happy that people enjoy all the drama nonsense I chuck out. :3

Date: 2013-08-09 01:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rilakkuyoona.livejournal.com
HOOOOLLLLLYYYYY CRAAAAAP! SHIT REALLY DID GO DOWN, BUT BETWEEN TAENGSIC! That was really unexpected. I like surprises but damn. Daaaaaaayuuuuuuum. Is it wrong to like WGTG Jessica even more 'cause she totally went apeshit on Taeyeon? I lurb Taeyeon but that was...kinda hot. :x It's also hilarious how the fight promptly ends because of the other Jessica. But shit, I'd freak out too. Me and snakes are a no-no.

Taeny was so cute, and their relationship was progressing smoothly. Unfairly smooth. SO YOU HAD TO MAKE THEM SUFFER TOO, HUH?! But if it means Taengsic, then...ahem. Ignore that last bit. Just a delusional shipper's thoughts. And dat pact. C'mon gaiz, if y'all keep messing things up like this, there really is gonna be Taengsic. A loveless Taengsic. :'( Maybe even Jeti. I don't even know anymore. Maybe...even Sunsica. Pft, NOPE.

The dramatic irony. Not Sunny. Not Seohyun. Damn, leave it up to Taeny to ruin Jessica's image. They didn't even know who she could have bedded. Smh. And everything was revealed to Yoona. Curiosity killed the cat. And let the snake loose. Damn, Seohyun hooking up with Yuri AND Jessica must make her feel...hah. Yoonhyun fight soon? But there's still the confrontation between Sunny and Seohyun to anticipate, right? Need my popcorn. I love watching drama unfold tbh, as long as I'm not involved. And that last bit. Beaten-up Taeyeon left behind by angry Jeti. Awwwwww.

Hyo's next~ Hm, there's so many character connections, I don't think she can escape the drama avalanche. Long comment this time! :D I'M HERE TO STAY. At least until September...? Don't worry, I'm staying with you till the very end bb. I need to watch more shit go down and fall apart. Haha. Hugs, I love hugs. Here's a hug for you.

Date: 2013-08-10 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
WAIT. SEPTEMBER?! AHHHH. D: Please stayyyyy.

Daaaaayuuuuummm is right! Taengsic threw down! (Jessica won. Of course lol) Hahaha it's not wrong to like Sica more for that. I mean, WGTG had people cheering on cheating, so...ANYTHING TO MAKE SHIZZ INTERESTING. It's pretty hot. ;D Omg yes. One Jessica started the fight. And the other Jessica finished it. Good Jess-Teamwork. SNAKES ARE AWESOME.

YES. THEY MUST SUFFER FOR SUCH UNSCATHED HAPPINESS. heh your shipper train of thought makes me smile.

I guess that is pretty ironic, eh? Taeny dropping the bomb was...ugh they just HAD to use names. Yoona must feel SO crappy about Seohyun swooping in on both Yuri and Sica. Geez. XD Save me some popcorn!

Nope. Hyo's there to witness the Sunny confrontation. She can't escape the avalanche, either.

*hugs* :3

Date: 2013-08-09 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cateyes330.livejournal.com
NINHUYGVVHJBBBFT TF CFVHNJNIJMININBBUBUBBO,KOMJIHBGYGTDCTVBNHUJIMJM

My Taengsic heart!!! Omg you made my day!! Lol thank you for the awesome cat fight! I'll comment later. Let me finish sleeping. I read this while half asleep and then I spazed. Don't know how my little note here is coherent. :D
Edited Date: 2013-08-09 02:02 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-08-09 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cateyes330.livejournal.com
Hahaha I finally got up! LMAO it's so hard to get up in the morning when I don't have classes. XD

I think the gay lady population is already so gay for them. I would buy SM's rip off shit regardless...

Am I a roses kinda girl? Hmm maybe. :D

But yea, after this chapter I truly gave up on your characters. Lol However, what Taeyeon said to Tiffany gave me a little hope for my OTP. Lol even if they bitch slap each other, I'm still happy. Lol some interaction is better than none. So thanks a million for that awesome fight. Although I'm surprised Jessica and Taeyeon never did anything sexually. I mean they're both hot and needy when they were single right? But I guess seeing each other as security blanket isn't all that bad. I actually find that rather cute? Nevertheless, I get why Tiffany would be pissed. I would laugh so hard if she somehow ends up in bed with someone else.

Hahaha the stupid couple strikes again! I'm pissed for Sica, her relationship with Yoona just started and those idiots had to come in and ruin everything. Lol I just love how the other Jessica saved the day. I guess snake Jessica is nicer than human Jessica. =D

Looking forward to the next line up of dramas. ~

P.s. it's obvious who I voted for on your poll. ;)
Edited Date: 2013-08-09 06:04 pm (UTC)

Date: 2013-08-10 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
Hope you slept well! :D

Aww. Roses. You're cute. :3

You gave up...in the good way, right? hahaha you wanted Taengsic skin-on-skin contact. Andddd a fight breaks out--enjoy!!! :D You're welcome! Writing a fight is kinda difficult. :/

I guess it's like picturing yourself sleeping with your best platonic friend? Maybe they found it weird. Who knowwwwss? I do.

Snake Jessica was so sick of that drama. She had to break it up. XD HAHAHAHA @ "Stupid Couple." Oh, TaeNy.

Thank youuuu~~

ps. Yes. I have an inkling. XD

Date: 2013-08-10 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
I just have to address that spazzing. Beautiful. *golf clap* XD

I can totes related to reading a feels-ful fic and going back to sleep. Good job on the coherence!

Date: 2013-08-09 04:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuukistar22.livejournal.com
A FREAKIN GIRL FIGHT :D???!!! *jaw dropping to the floor* OH MY FREAKING GOD YES. WHY ARE GIRLS FIGHTS SO...URGH I DON'T KNOW, THEY ARE JUST SO GREAT. I ALWAYS KNEW JESSICA WOULD FINALLY SNAP AND GO BITCH CRAZY.

*clears throat* I should calm down...

“I hate you. Leave.” Ahh Sica's bluntless is just so so great, ive probably said that before but URGH it's just so entertaining. For some reason, i would really like a friend like her...or you know, a real friend....one that isn't imaginary....forever alone

OH GOD NOW THERE'S TROUBLE IN PARADISE WITH TAENY D: IF THEY BREAK UP, I...I JUST DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M GOING TO DO WITH MYSELF!

NO NO NO NO NO OH GOD NO NO THE YOONSIC SHIP HAS BEEN DESTROYED D: MY INSIDES ARE HURTING :'( It's times like these where i wish i had the tainted couch to sit on/inhale..wait wut? Though i can understand why Yoona is mad at Jessica, but STIILLLLLLL :(

It's raining drama, this is amazing, i love you, im going to cry myself to sleep.

Yay~ Hyoyeon is next. I've missed her player antics and what not. I wonder how far she's going to be roped in to all this drama shiz. Only time will tell i suppose~ AND I CAN'T WAIT

Keep up the amazingness BB, byeeeeeee



Date: 2013-08-10 02:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
HAPPY UN-BIRTHDAY, YUUKISTAR. A girl fight. For you. Wrapped up in a shiny Taengsic bow.

Hahaha don't calm down, fellow perv!! XDDD

Gorl.....don't be forever alone. Maybe this alternate universe Jessica exists somewhere out there? I'm sure you have some pervy friends of your own. *hugs* And, you have me!! :D

D: OH NO. YELLS ABOUT TAENY AND YOONSIC. ......then you get pervy again. Hahah you'd stick your face into that couch, wouldn't you? Guuuuuurlll.

Hyo is there to deal with Sunny vs. Seohyun, no doubt. She can't help but we roped in. ;)

Thanks youuuuu, hon. ;D

Date: 2013-08-09 09:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teamkame.livejournal.com
Oh damn. Shit is hitting the fan now! I still want to read more. I need another update soon! All wildness aside.

Oddly, even though Jessica went apeshit on taeyeon I kept thinking about BoA/Tiffany getting together. I'm not sure why. Lol I mean why not? The whole fic has crazy stuff happening already and even it's own home/wrecker. *cough*seohyun*cough* might as well make another one! Besides, BoA is hot so is Tiffany and together it is just hot. That sounds like a win win situation to me. :P

plus, no one writes them and I'm curious about how their interaction would be. That crazy idea aside, I wonder how things will turn out for jessica since taeyeon ruined things for yoona and Jessica. Will my forever alone! Jessica prediction happen!? :0 but the ending though, will there finally be jeti?! 0_0 since Jessica did like Tiffany. Are you trying to make our heads spin again? Lol

By the way, I've been lurking. Sorry! But I keep up with the updates.

Date: 2013-08-10 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
Do you want more? I'LL GIVE YOU MORE. Haha sorry. In a few days. :3

BoA and Tiffany. Who knows? haha Will BoA just float around with her hippie ways as a bg character or will she serve some higher purpose? Awww Seolady--the cutest homewrecker in all the land. :3

BoA's ultra hot. However, a ninth cray gay lady in the mix? Idk if my dramz-filled brain can handle. XD And you're right--the fandom lacks soshi/BoA loviness.

"Will my forever alone! Jessica prediction happen!? :0"---You've been saying that from the start, haven't you? =__= MY POOR JESSI.

GASP. LURKER!!! Reveal yourself, gorl!! haha

Thanks for dropping a comment, bb. :3

Date: 2013-08-10 02:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dashelots.livejournal.com
ARGHHHH. You'd mentioned ~something~ happening to Taeny and I guess as a defense mechanism I automatically jumped to the worse conclusions like: OMG NO WHAT IF TIFFANY DIES (YOU ONLY GARANTEED THAT TIFFANY WOULDN'T DIE BEFORE HER CHAPTER, NOT DURING HER CHAPTER NOOOO. or WHAT IF TIFFANY'S DAD RECALLS HER TO THE US AND TAENY BECOME STAR-CROSSED LOVERS DESTINED FOR MUTUAL DEATH NOOOO. So really, compared to what was going through my brain this is so not so bad, BUT STILL MY FEELS ARE ALL OVER THE WALLS AND GODDAMMIT TIFFANY FORGIVE HER ALREADY pls and thank you.

So, not only did you manage to trigger my creys for Taeny but OH MY GOD Yoonsic as well? I knew something would break up the Yoonsic love-cave sooner or later, but I was just really not expecting sooner RATHER THAN later. Nooo, bb Yoona must be feeling so inadequate, and like Seohyun is a thorn in her side that she's never going to get out because Yuri AND Jessica going for the SAME girl, that doesn't happen. >:( Except that it does in WGTG and it's soooo good, YAY FOR THE DRAMZ I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR MY WHOLE LYFE.

Taeyeon's lack of tact gives me so much life. Such a precious dumb bb. But the way she treats her friends entertains me to no end. Like she's all motherly with Seohyun and supportive of Sunny and Antagonistic but actually really protective/caring with Jessica and the depth added to the Taengsic friendship this chapter makes me happy (even though it made Tiffany the opposite of happy), oh well~

The girls and their happiness are falling like dominoes and I'm sitting here in a pool of tears but who am I kidding? I love this stuff. :') THIS STORY JUST BRINGS OUT ALL THESE STRANGE EMOTIONS IN MEEE. How you do dat?

But this chapter also reminded me of how ;~; I am for Sunny. Bb it's okay, I can't wait to read what you've got coming up for her. And Yoona, And Seohyun & Yuri. And FREAKEN Sooyoung. So I'm already preparing myself mentally for the next chapter because I'm sure it's going to be hilarious and all the ~things~ are going to happen and I am anticipating.

And have it word-vomited enough yet? Because I feel like I'm literally just pouring all of my feels in word form into this comment and it's strange. But whatevs.

K, I hope you enjoyed uploading this on your SUPER SPEEDY INTERNET.

Thanks, see you, goodnight/goodmorning, bye~~ :3

(holy crap that's a lot of caps in one comment, sorry but not really.)

Date: 2013-08-10 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dashelots.livejournal.com
Oh oh, and also LMAO Jessica and Taeyeon ACTUALLY getting physical and Tiffany just kind of standing there like O__O "what do I dooo?" was way too funny but actually kind of tragic 'cause JUST LOOK HOW MUCH JESSICA CARESSSSS. OMG.

Oh and you're online? WHY ARE YOU ONLINE SO EARLY? Wait, is it even early? Idk. Sorry ignore me.

K, actually going now. THANKS FOR TRAMPLING ON MY HEART, it was fun. (:

Date: 2013-08-10 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
I squealed with glee when I saw your name pop up on my notificationssss. :D

Yesss. I'm online. But it's like 3am where u are :0000. And hahaha I'm not up THAT early. It just turned 11am. :D However, I was out drinking with coworker friends last night, so I'm proud of being up THIS early.

ANYWAYS. Back to the sparkly awesomeness you bestowed upon my humble page. XD SO MANY FEELS.

HAHAHAHHA I LOVE that you have to watch my words carefully. WGTG Tiffany *won't* die AT ALL. hahaa Neither will Taeyeon. However Sunny..gotta watch her....((LOL I'M KIDDING No death in this fic. ONLY DEATH OF LOVE)) AND THE FEELS. SO MANY FEELS EXPRESSED HERE.

When TaeNy mess up, they mess up HARD. Not only are the having issues, but they affected Jessica's little love nest before lunch! Record time, tbh. For bbYoona--Seohyun is the nightmare that keeps coming and the gift that keeps giving for readers. XD ((And as a side note: I know someone who had this happen. One of he bf's cheated on her with some random girl...then the boyfriend after that cheated on her with the SAME chick. LOL forever.))

"YAY FOR THE DRAMZ I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR MY WHOLE LYFE. " YAAAAAYYYY so fun when you're not personally involved, eh? XDDD

Another amazing quote: "Taeyeon's lack of tact gives me so much life." RIGHT!?!? Taeyeon said, "Never fear, I shall ruin Jessica's day/life in a matter of seconds!" The dynamic with her friends is layered; esp. with Jessica. So much going on there.

NOBODY'S happy at the end of this chapter. D: I managed to make you all creys, but love it, too. YUUUUSSSSS. Tis what I'm here for--to entertain. :D

Poor, poor Sunny. Innocent party shafted yet again. Well, we'll definitely see more of her, Yuri, Seohyun, and Hyo next chapter. Sooyoung's doing things in the background haha. Idk. She's being a normal human being actually going to work and paying bills. Yet, her level-headedness will be needed soon. Gotta help the bestie.

I loveeee the word vomit. Reading these make me smile so hard. THE JOY. :D I'm very PROUD of my internet, thank you very much. :P

Also: hahahahaha Tiffany really didn't know how to diffuse the situation, so she watched. JESSICA CARES SO MUCHHH. SO MUCH.

Oooooohhh I hope I trample your heart (in the good way) again soon. I feel like the SunHyoSeoRi confrontation may be more lulzy simply because of the knuckleheads involved. XD

THANK YOUUUU. ......write more fic when you wake up. :0000

questions...

Date: 2013-08-10 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the-bluebearies.livejournal.com
opps! so yoona knew that jessica was with seohyun through taeyeon? hahaha~

epic fight!!

but.... I don't get why Taeyeon was asking for Tiffany's forgiveness. and why was tiffany angry? I... don't understand this part. >.>

great chapter once again. yay!!

ps:

"Tiffany leaned over to peck her lady’s full, puffy cheek with gratitude. She’s the cutest little chipmunk. My chipmunk."

I really like this part. my favourite line in this chapter. heee
Edited Date: 2013-08-10 08:32 pm (UTC)

Re: questions...

Date: 2013-08-11 09:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
YES. Taeyeon let the cat out the bag. Oh, her LOL

Yay question time! There's a number of reasons Taeyeon may be apologizing:
-For keeping the "backup girlfriend" thing a secret.
-For having a backup gf in the first place and it being Jessica of all people.
-Pretending that their friend Sunny had a chance in the beginning.
-Fighting/her temper, possibly. (Granted, Jessica started it)
-Sending her through that whirlwind of feels.

Thank youuuu.

PS. hehehehe glad u like the Chipmunk!Taeyeon line. She's so cute. :3

Date: 2013-08-11 08:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stephanstarr.livejournal.com
OMG HOW COULD YOU?!?!??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NO OTP IS SAFE!

Date: 2013-08-11 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
THE WGTG WORLD IS DOG-EAT-DOG.

NOONE'S SAFE. NO. ONE.

This is extra funny since I had commented on your fluffy new Taeny fic the other day. XD

Date: 2013-08-11 09:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kotegawa87.livejournal.com
Omg!...
I'm ... without words...!!
Yoongie knows... that jessica knows seobaby... and probably that they slept together...
Aaahhh...
And taeyeon just... screw everything!...
Grrrr for some reason i hate her in this story...
:(

Poor jessi...
And tiffany what is wrong wigh you... ???

Omo...
I don't have words!!!!

I can't wait for the next chapted!!

Date: 2013-08-11 09:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
Omg!! Things were revealed and NOBODY'S happy atm!

Awwwww, do you truly hate bbTaey for being dumb? hahahaha I understand the anger. XD

Sad, Sad Jessi and Tiffany's...confused.

I like the words that you did have!! :D

Thanksssss ^^

Date: 2013-08-11 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Ehehe Sica doesn't go to the grocery shop,she has something else to do *pervert face*

Tae how you dare to touch Sica's croissants!? You're very very thoughtless. In fact i was scared that a lightning struck her the exact moment that she touched the croissants. It would have been a nice plot twist tho :D

Tae: Oh croissants *_*
Tiff: Are you sure that those are for us?
Tae: Yeah! ofc are for- *lightning*
Tiff: NOOOOOO TAAAAEEEE!
Jessica appeared: This is the end for those who touch MY croissants without permission.
Tiff: Sniff...give me back my Tae, we had projects...sniff...live...sniff...together...sniff...a-
Jessica: Shut that mouth,i've something else to do. You disturbed me. Bye mortals...oops,i wanted to say mortal AHAHAHA!!
THE END
LOL

“Jessiii? Are you in there!?”
"No,there isn't anyone in here. This voice is recorded."
LOL

These two are terrible tho. It's not your business. Get out of there!!

I'm laughing 'cause they mentioned Sunny,but i stop because she's probably killing Seo so...my poor bb :(

Tae is not a chipmunk. She is a little invadent cute brat :)

Tiff is scared.
Tiff finds something.
Tiff is excited.
Tiff calls Tae.
Tae always thinks about that.
Tiff is not thinking about that.
That is...Sooyeon's PHONE?????
THEY KNOW THE PASSCODE???
OMFG.
THEY'RE SO INVADENT... BUSYBODIES and i LOVE IT !!
Two new text.Two new text.TWO NEW TEXT!!!SEO'S TEXT!!
Holy zizzy they know...Tae is mad...TAE IS MAD!!
Tae you're biased tho. Why Sunny is ok,but Seobaby's not?? EH??
OH...MY...GOD...!!!? YOUR WHAT TAE?? I PRESUME THAT IS NOT A GOOD THING. OH MINNIE,TAENGSIC WAS...REAL!?
A PACT?? WHAT KIND OF PACT?? OOOOH THAT KIND OF PACT!! (ok,i though about a sexual pact...don't mind me!)
More than a friend but less than a lover...what is it?? Did they make out at least sometimes?? My taengsic shipper-self wants to know!!

Mmmh this situation is very strange. Tiffany's doubts/thoughts are absolutely legit. Lord,i don't know what to think. I mean if you choose a person as your backup,it literally means that you think about that person as a possible lover and you're good with it. That deep down you like that person. (Jessica is a liar anyway :D) Really i'm confused,i do...OH MY FUCKING GOD TAE WHAT DID YOU DO.

I can't believe that you called Seo,HOLY MARIA MAGDALENA!!
You mentioned Seo AND Yuri,OH GOD!!
TADÀ it's not Seo!
"Oops" <--- This deserves an oscar ROFL
"They’re stupid" <--- *Nod approvely*
My bb is sad now. My heart ached a little tbh.
Poor Yoona too. How long did Yoonsic last? One hour?

Oh bloody hell!! Sica now is mad...HOLY COW IN THE FREEZER IS HELLA MAD AND SHE ATTACKED TAE!???
OUCH HAIR OUCH!!
TAENGSIC CATFIGHT! OMFG TIFFANY DO SOMETHING!!NO NO,I TAKE IT BACK,DON'T DO ANYTHING!!
SICA IF YOU KILL HER,YOU WILL NOT HAVE A BACKUP ANYMOREEE!!

Fiuu~ they're all alive!!

Wat? Tiff doesn't forgive Tae? Oh oh...

OMO where are they going?? to Yoona's??

Anyway the catfight was amazingly arousing unexpected...

Next Hyoyeon...it will be hilarious!

BB,you're good at this!! Keep it up :)

Thanks and see ya as always to the next chappy ;-)

P.S Seo the gun the GUN!!





Date: 2013-08-11 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
HAHAHHAHAHHAA OH, CRAY ANON.

The tragic death of Taeyeon due to touching the croissants. Omg hahahahaha

“Jessiii? Are you in there!?”
"No,there isn't anyone in here. This voice is recorded." BAHAHA!!! Omg stahp.

Ahhhh the building up of your freak out. I love how your right line-for-line like that--It's like I'm there watching you read it. XD

"I can't believe that you called Seo,HOLY MARIA MAGDALENA!! "--DUDE. So many quotable moments in this comment. So epic omg omg.

"Poor Yoona too. How long did Yoonsic last? One hour?"--LAWDDDD. XDDDD

"HOLY COW IN THE FREEZER IS HELLA MAD AND SHE ATTACKED TAE!??? " ANOTHER ONE. WHYYYYYY DO YOU KILLZ ME?? XD

Oh man. *wipes tear* I heart you so much, Cray Anon. And it doesn't surprise me that you're another reader getting all hot and bothered over the Taengsic fight. :P

Thankssssss

Date: 2013-08-17 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] planet-ac.livejournal.com
I am eternally late for your updates!

So good, this chapter. Woohoo...catfight! Never thought I'd actually enjoy reading about women fighting! So exciting....

Let me go read the next chapter.

Date: 2013-08-17 06:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
Never too late!! :D

Welcome to the magical world of girl fights. Lol jk. XD But really--Jessica totally won.

Thank youuuu!! W000hooo catchup!

Date: 2014-01-08 10:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilaccrane.livejournal.com
HOT DAYUMMMM! That was messy.. actually, it was messy a few chapters back.. but i loveee it.. hot mess is frustrating but i love it!
Royal Smackdown in the house y'all!! :))

Date: 2014-01-09 05:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
HOT MESSINESS EVERYWHERE. *rains drama*

Hahahah frustrating?! Oh nos xDDD

Royal Smackdown on TAEYEON'S FACE. Bam.

Hehehe. Thanks, bb~

Date: 2017-06-18 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 8moons2stars.livejournal.com
HOLY JESUS HOLY LORD
WHAT JUST HAPPENED LOLOLOLLLLL *insert Community gif with burning chaos all around*
My mouth was gaping when Taeyeon fucking blurted out Seohyun's name and then everything just went WILD OMG THAT BITCH FIGHT HAHAHAHAHAHAHA and then I cried from laughter because the goddamn SNAKE LOLOLOL I CAN TOTALLY IMAGINE JESS AND FANY DOLPHIN SQUEALING THE DEAFNESS OUT OF TAEYEON HAHAHAHA wowowowow

I hate drama...but I love the way you play it out HAHAHAHAHA

Fave character right goddamn now: Jessica the Snake XD

Date: 2017-06-19 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] checkinyourbra.livejournal.com
AHHAHA I HAD TO SCROLL UP TO SEE WHAT YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT. Jessica didn't get a day after her ~loveeeemakinggg~. Like, not even hours. Tsk.

PERFECT GIF USAGE.

Hahahhaha I made TaengSic fight. Like, actually fight. Good tiiiiimes.

Thank you for loving my drama. *bows*

"Fave character right goddamn now: Jessica the Snake XD"-- I can get behind this! xD

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